ext_16777 ([identity profile] laiquendai.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awritinglilypea 2009-03-12 05:47 pm (UTC)

that was great fun. The fustration he feels at wanting her, and not even realising he's staring at her, and she's walked over... brilliant.

love that last line too - the whole concept of being left cold at every rejection - fantastic.

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