ext_39864 ([identity profile] not-a-lamb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] awritinglilypea 2011-11-13 06:22 am (UTC)

It breaks my heart a little how careful they are with each other. In a way, it's really sweet and considerate of them for each other, bu in another, I just wish that they could be effortlessly close.

I was so PSYCHED to come across this today!!! I'd given up on this fic and that was so tragic! Thank you so much for writing more!!! I'll have to check back more regularly.

I feel a lot of sympathy for Orlando when he tell Elijah that a lot of things are easier than you thought. He's so gentle with Lij and so tenderly just nudging him in the right direction, and trying to do that without being condescending or heavy-handed. It's got to be so frustrating for him! I see the same thing with my mom. She tries so hard to be encouraging, but sometimes it's hard not to resent her. I hope Elijah is able to avoid that with Orli and just see how much Orlando loves him and wants him to be happy.

Sorry for the long comment. This fic always sets me off a little. There's just so much in it that I relate to. I'm so pleased that you've decided to continue it! THANK YOU for writing it. :D

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